Writing speech plan

LI to create a persuasive speech.
This week for writing Mr Ogilvies groups had to finish off their speech plan, we had to fill in every box with at least something so next week we can just edit them and make them sound good. The speech plan for this week was one where we had to make sure that every box was fifteen seconds long or a bit less, while making this speech plan I learnt many things about the benefits of having breakfast in the morning.
I did this by searching through many websites and also by using my general knowledge to improve my plan.

Introduction of yourself Hi, my name is Alex. I am a year six student in LS1 panmure bridge school. I chose to make my argument about having breakfast in the morning at school, here are my reasons as to why we should have it.	Introduction of topic and Rhetorical question School breakfast was awesome, all you had to do was go to school with your lunch, uniform and bag. The reason for this is because in the school hall parent volunteers were in the hall serving breakfast. If you remember that do you want it to happen again?
POV and why you believe this I believe that we should have breakfast in school because there are many facts that can prove that having breakfast in the morning is better for your education, concentration and focus in the classroom.
Reason 1 My first reason is because if you eat breakfast in the morning you can learn a lot more than if you don’t.	Facts and Statistics Studies that go back as far as the 1950’s can prove that having breakfast in the morning improves your ability to learn. They proved this by administering attention tests, the children who ate breakfast did far better than the children who didn’t.
Reason 2 My second reason is because if you eat breakfast in the morning and get lots of carbohydrates you’ll be able to do better in sporting events and be less likely to miss classes and report late.	Facts and Statistics Facts also prove that if you eat breakfast in the morning you’ll have more muscle coordination and have less of a chance to be obese. Link
Reason 3 My last reason is because you can do a lot better in school if you eat breakfast. And you’ll also have better vitamins and minerals.	Facts and Statistics Studies have shown that for children under 18 eating breakfast in the morning can have a positive influence on their performance in school. 36 studies have shown that children who eat breakfast have much higher test scores and grades. It also showed that they had higher Iron levels, higher vitamin B and higher vitamin D.
Solution So as a solution to the children who get to school late because they slept in and took too long eating breakfast, they would just need to get dressed and do everything else they normally do except for eating, therefore allowing them to get to school earlier.	Summary So all in all, these are the reasons as to why I think we should have breakfast in the morning at school. The facts that I have said prove that having breakfast can improve performance, attitude and brain activity in classes.