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Saturday, 8 July 2017

Holiday reading challenge day 5 Activity 1

For this activity I had to write 8-10 sentences about what I would do and feel if I got stuck in the park and couldn't get out.

As I turned around to show the other's in the tour the tree I'd found I realised they'd gone without me! I quickly panicked and called out for help, but as I waited for what seemed to be an eternity nobody came. Once I'd realised that no help was coming until at least the morning I curled up into a ball and used my bag as a pillow. As much as I tried I couldn't get any sleep when I was close to dozing off I always heard something spooky which forced me to awaken. After at least the fifth time of that happening I gave up trying to sleep and climbed up a tree to occupy myself while I tried to think of a way to get back to civilisation. I found myself a good spot in tree with strong branches around me so I couldn't fall out if I fell asleep, it was there that I sat until the weariness go to me and I dozed off. When I awoke I heard voices calling my name I also heard the chirping of the birds and the warm light of the sun on my back, I quickly shouted 'I'm here!' and heard footsteps rushing towards me. The first person to see me was Curious Kiwi and as he called to the others to help them find us I quickly picked my bag up and climbed down the tree.

5 comments:

  1. Hi Alex,
    I really love the story you've written in your own words. I love it how you told us what kind of sounds were the birds making.
    Keep it up.

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  2. Hi Alex. Great blogpost. I really like your story, because it paints a story in my head. You have a couple of mistakes in your story. Make sure you double check your blogpost, before you post it. Other than that you did great. Keep up the awesome blogging.

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  3. Hey Alex!

    This is a really cool, creative story! Well done! The way you wrote it makes you feel like you are the person stuck in the forest which is intriguing!

    I'm really impressed!

    Nicky :)

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  4. Hey Alex
    Great job creating your short story. I like how you used dialogue and you made Curious Kiwi a character in your story. Well done Alex.
    Daniel

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  5. Hello Alex, you have written a wonderful story. I like how you have added in dialogue to show that the characters in your story are talking. Great work.

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